Richard CrumJan 13, 20213 min readThe New YearHi EFE Writers, Historically, the best art has been produced during the worst of times. So the turmoil that's kicking up in our nation...
Richard CrumJul 30, 20203 min readCLUMSY WRITING FLAW #4Blog No. 07292020 Participle (Infinite Verb) Phrases What is clumsy about the following sentence: Looking up from his book, Joe said,...
Richard CrumMay 31, 20202 min readCLUMSY WRITING FLAW #3 Blog 05312020 AVOID VERBS WITH AUXILIARIES An auxiliary is a post-modern term for the old-fashion phrase helping verb. Example: In the...
Richard CrumMay 19, 20203 min readCLUMSY WRITING FLAW #2 [blog 05192020] Using passive voice without clear intent of what writer is after Example: "What bit you?" "I was bitten by a dog." The...
Richard CrumMay 3, 20204 min readWELCOME EFE WRITERSDuring the weeks ahead, we will be looking at examples of clumsy writing and how to smooth out the flaws. The compass points for every...